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Compare all sixThis audit reviews Indigo With Stars, a single author's store selling books, art prints, and music, and shows why the homepage and product pages never explain what they are or why to trust them.
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Indigo With Stars sells one author's complete body of work: books, art prints, music, and downloads, with editions available in four languages and eight titles on CD. That is a real catalog built from decades of writing since 1970, and it gives the store a genuine story to tell that most competing sites do not have to work with.
The homepage does not tell that story. It shows a grid of book covers with no author name, no description of what the books are, and no reason to trust the store. A hero section does exist further down the page, but a first time visitor has to scroll past unexplained products before ever reaching it and learning what the site is about.
That same gap repeats further into the site. Collection pages show books as a plain grid with little context and no easy way to add a second title at a discount, and individual product pages list format and price without ever saying why a particular book matters, what condition it is in, or why a stranger should trust buying it online.
Our CRO strategist's redesign concept opens with a hero that states who the author is, what the store sells, and why to trust it, then walks visitors through organized shelves, a short path finder quiz, and product pages built to answer every hesitation before the buy button. The story already exists here. The site just needs to tell it.
The homepage shows a grid of products with no explanation of what the books are, who wrote them, or why a visitor should trust the store, so people arrive on the site and have to guess everything themselves before they can buy.
The store already has decades of writing history since 1970, work published in four languages, and eight CD albums to draw on. A guided homepage and product pages that use that history could turn browsers into confident buyers.
Once the hero, collection pages, and product pages actually explain and sell the work, paid traffic sent to the site has a real chance of converting instead of arriving and leaving unconvinced.
Five dimensions, each scored out of ten.
13 issues found, 15 fixes proposed.
The homepage is a grid of book covers with no title explanation, no author name, and no description of what each product actually is.
The hero copy that explains who the author is and what the store sells sits well below the fold, after visitors have already scrolled past unexplained product grids.
Nothing above the fold tells a new visitor what the business is, what it sells, or why to trust it, the three things a hero should answer first.
Decades of writing since 1970, work in four languages, and eight CD albums all exist, but none of that history is shown to a first time visitor.
Books are listed as a bare grid with no filtering and no guidance toward the right title, so shoppers have to scan everything themselves.
Shoppers currently have no obvious way to add a second book at a discount, so the store sells one item at a time when many would buy a pair.
A product page lists format and price but does not say what the book is about, who wrote it, or why it is worth owning.
There is currently one way to buy each book, with no choice between an original, a signed, or a signed on request copy.
Collectible details like remaining copy counts and condition are not displayed, so a shopper cannot tell how rare or how new a book is.
Product pages do not address who ships the book, what shipping involves, or what returns look like, leaving natural questions unanswered before checkout.
Nothing on the product page shows that other people have bought and liked the book, so a new visitor has no outside reassurance.
The page shows the product but never makes the case for it, and online shoppers who cannot hold the book need that case made for them.
Sending ad traffic to the current pages means paying for visits that arrive interested and leave hesitant, because the site itself is not built to close the sale.
Open with a hero that states who the author is, what the store sells, and why to trust it, before any product grid appears.
Add the writing since 1970 line, the four language editions, and the eight CD albums directly into the hero to build trust immediately.
Offer two direct paths from the hero, such as start exploring or find what's calling you, so visitors move forward instead of scrolling blind.
Build a short three question quiz that routes shoppers toward books, art prints, music, or downloads based on their answers.
Group products into a shop by shelves layout so visitors can browse by category instead of scrolling an unexplained product grid.
Let shoppers filter the books collection by what they are actually looking for, instead of scanning every title in one long grid.
Show the title, a short description, and the price on every book card so the collection page starts selling before a shopper clicks in.
Let shoppers add a second book at a discount directly from the collection page, instead of buying only one title at a time.
Place a short FAQ block on each collection page to answer common questions about the books before shoppers reach checkout.
Display remaining copy counts and condition, such as three copies remaining and like new, so scarcity and quality are visible, not assumed.
Show customer reviews on the product page so a new visitor has outside proof that other people bought and liked the book.
Let shoppers choose between an original copy, a signed copy, or a signed on request copy, instead of just one fixed listing.
Add a section covering condition, shipping and returns, and who ships the book, so common hesitations are answered before checkout.
Include the publisher, publication date, and condition for every book so shoppers have the reference details a collector expects.
Add a section that makes the case for the book directly, explaining its value so the page gives shoppers a reason to buy, not just a listing to read.
A concept redesign created by Convertica Studio from this audit. It shows how the store could work, it is not the live store.
Homepage, shown as two long columns: the opening, the category grid and the footer in one scroll.
Three pages side by side: the homepage in the centre, the product page's buy column on the left and the category page on the right.
The bag slide-over open over the product page, whole screen, with the full list of lines and the checkout button in view.
The "find your path" quiz, step by step: what brought her here, the feeling she wants, who it is for, and the short shelf that comes back.
The product page in two long columns, from the buy box down to the footer.
The product page's first screen: header, photos and the whole buy box with edition choice, price and the add to basket button.
The category page's first screen: banner, the "not sure" prompt, filters and the first row of products.
The "Shop by category" menu open, with every shelf named in plain words.
Three phone screens: home, the filter sheet on the books page, and the product page with its pinned buy button.
It shows a grid of products with no explanation of what they are or who wrote them. A hero section does exist further down, but visitors have to scroll past unexplained products to reach it, so the store's story never lands first.
A hero is the first thing a visitor reads, and it should answer what the business is, what it sells, and why to trust it. When that copy sits below unexplained products, visitors form their first impression before the store gets to make its case.
The store has been writing since 1970, publishes in four languages, and has eight albums on CD, but none of that history appears on the site. Those are exactly the kind of details that make a first time visitor feel confident buying.
They need filtering so shoppers can browse by what they want instead of scanning a full grid, and book cards that explain the title and story instead of showing a cover and a price. A short FAQ block would also answer common questions before checkout.
It lets a shopper add a second book at a discount directly from the collection page instead of buying one title at a time. Right now that option does not exist, so the store is leaving multi item orders on the table.
The pages list format and price but never explain what the book is about or why it is worth owning. They also lack reviews, condition details, and a section addressing shipping and returns, all of which online buyers look for before purchasing.
Offering an original, a signed, or a signed on request copy gives collectors a reason to pay more and gives casual buyers a lower priced way in. A single fixed listing serves neither shopper well.
Displaying details like three copies remaining and like new condition tells a shopper exactly what they are getting and how scarce it is. Without that information, a book page reads like a plain listing instead of a collectible item worth acting on.
Online buyers cannot hold the book before buying, so they need condition, shipping, and returns information answered directly on the page. Leaving those questions unanswered creates hesitation right at the point of purchase.
Not yet. Traffic sent to the current pages arrives interested but meets a product page that does not make the case to buy, so ad spend is likely to be lost before the redesign is in place.
The homepage opens with a hero that explains the store, a path finder quiz and shelf layout guide visitors to the right products, and product pages add reviews, purchase options, and a clear case for buying. The goal is a site that can actually convert the traffic it is paid to bring in.
The nine minute recording covers the homepage design concept, the collection pages, and the product page details, then closes with next steps and pricing for implementing the redesign in Shopify.
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